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Thursday, October 29, 2020

Gaming Addiction - Persuasive Writing

I strongly believe that children these days spend too much time on video games and that's very unhealthy. You could lose a lot of friends And when you spend too much time on games you become overweight and you won't get any exercise in your day because you are too busy playing a game on the ps4.



Firstly is sleep deprivation. When you lose sleep it can cause so many problems with your life. Sleep deprivation affects how you live your everyday life by making you tired all the time,Just wanting to sleep all day and you wont get any exercise in your day and end up over weight. Gaming makes you stay up early in the morning.



Violence when you play violent video games some people will think that this behavior is ok. Games like fortnite,call of duty,GTA and many more. Most videos are very violent and people  play when they're underaged. Some games are rated 18+ but most people that play are 15 and under. For example fortnite it's rated 12+ but some kids play at 9 and under. Violence video games can cause brain damage.



Lastly when you get addicted you get less vitamin D which means that you don't get any sunshine when you're inside your room and you become less active. When you stare at screens all day it can damage your eyes really badly and you will need to wear glasses.


Those are my Three main ideas on why i think children spend too much time on video games.